Salaam bloggers. For this weeks writing we did narrative writing it was fun because you got to create your own story and write about it. Here is a link.
And if you want to see my lockdown creations here is the link.
So there it is if you like my blog please reply on my blog on the comments below this blog. I will try to comment on your blogs as well.
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Salaam Huzaifah. When I read your reflections I can see that you’ve had another great week. Well done! (Remember to read your sentences aloud before you post them). I found the draft of your narrative on slide 11. You have created very unusual characters on a mission. If you added more sentences in the middle that would give your story more detail. How did their amazing bodies help them in New York? Keep up your positive attitude. You are doing lots of good mahi. Enjoy some fitness and fresh air in the weekend.
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